Sunday, January 18, 2009

A New Story: The Mites (Part 1)

Hey everyone! I just thought of this story based on "The Tale of Despereaux" and my own family called "The Mites". Hope you guys like it! Here it is (da da da dum da dum!):

(This is only the intro, there's no Mites yet. Sorry, but just keep reading!) In a small town named Coopa Tino, there was a little cozy cottage. Inside it, there lived a family: Dad, Mom, Phil, and little Jane (I'm using nicknames, not real names). They had a wonderful life full of good times and bad. (Now I wll skip to the Mites. YAY!) Little did they know that inside the wall in the little corner of the attic that they never used, little tiny people had formed. They were called the Mites (APPLAUSE, APPLAUSE, APPLAUSE!). Now their lives were full of luxury and peace all the time, except for one little thing. They didn't know what food or water looks like! They couldn't eat or drink, so they could easily die. One day, there was another Mite was born. He was a very brave Mite and somehow could stay alive a long time.

SUSPENSE! HA HA HA HA HA! I need to finish my Elephant Story. I'll write more soon! :-)

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

GOOD STORY! I like the way you wrote Coopa Tino! That's so cool!

Anonymous said...

BTW, my blog adress is now andolynsworld.blogspot.com. I have posted a TON of stuff.

Jh5505 said...

thanks! i saw that stuff. it's amazing how calvin and hobbes could become anime. c u at school!

Lyddie said...

Hi! I have a new blog that is kind of messed up. It's partly in Korean, though I'll fix it. It's called shimmerflower.blogspot.com.
I love your story so far! Keep it up!