Monday, January 19, 2009

Elephant Land Story (Part 1)

Hey peeps! I wrote and introduction/preview before right? Here is the real story! Here it is (da da da dum da dum!):


Flashback: One day, in the meadow, the friends heard a noise.

(I think I'll add a new character that's not in any of our lives.) There was a little deer eating grass where the friends always played. "Maybe we should make friends with her." said Artist. "Yeah," everyone else agreed, "That way, we can share the meadow and have another friend!" So, the friends (I will start calling them "the friends", unless I'm only referring to one of them.) went over to the deer in the meadow. "Hi!" the friends said, "What's your name?" The deer said, "My name is Fighter. What are your names?" "Our names are: Elphy, Hedggie, Artist, and Puppy. Ummm you happen to be eating in our play area." the friends answered. Fighter said, "Oh, I'm so sorry! Can I play with you then?" "Of course!" the friends said. They quickly became friends, and started playing acorn tag. Acorn tag is basically regular tag, except the "It" person tags the other animals with an acorn. To be continued.....

Not a lot of supense this time, huh? I don't have a lot of good ideas right now, but I'll try to make part 3 more interesting! Cya peeps!

Sunday, January 18, 2009

A New Story: The Mites (Part 1)

Hey everyone! I just thought of this story based on "The Tale of Despereaux" and my own family called "The Mites". Hope you guys like it! Here it is (da da da dum da dum!):

(This is only the intro, there's no Mites yet. Sorry, but just keep reading!) In a small town named Coopa Tino, there was a little cozy cottage. Inside it, there lived a family: Dad, Mom, Phil, and little Jane (I'm using nicknames, not real names). They had a wonderful life full of good times and bad. (Now I wll skip to the Mites. YAY!) Little did they know that inside the wall in the little corner of the attic that they never used, little tiny people had formed. They were called the Mites (APPLAUSE, APPLAUSE, APPLAUSE!). Now their lives were full of luxury and peace all the time, except for one little thing. They didn't know what food or water looks like! They couldn't eat or drink, so they could easily die. One day, there was another Mite was born. He was a very brave Mite and somehow could stay alive a long time.

SUSPENSE! HA HA HA HA HA! I need to finish my Elephant Story. I'll write more soon! :-)